Success Criteria:
Title
A beginning having who, what, where, why when
Events having what happened in order the oreder they happened
Ending having what happened at the end and an comment that evaluates
WALT: Make a recount about something we did in the holiday from our shoes perspective.
Title
A beginning having who, what, where, why when
Events having what happened in order the oreder they happened
Ending having what happened at the end and an comment that evaluates
WALT: Make a recount about something we did in the holiday from our shoes perspective.
The Beach
On one nice day my owner grabbed me and slipped me onto his feet then walked out the door to his dad's truck. I was put under the seat behind me while the truck started driving down the street then before I knew it I got taken out of the truck and was on a big gravel car park. Then my owner walked over some huge rocks to see a beach spreading across further than the eye can see, before I got a really good look at everything my owner started walking not on the beach but instead he started walking around the sanctuary then my owner said to his dad “what walk are we doing today” and his dad replied saying “around the sanctuary then we’ll go up to the tip and down to the beach back to the truck”.
Going around the sanctuary was quite boring, a couple times a bee would get near and my owner would do anything he could to avoid it which was basically all that happened except for the walking part . Once we got out of the sanctuary part of the walk we went up to the tip. When we got to the tip my owner started taking me over all the rocks to the very end of the tip and waited for a wave to come up. Luckily no waves came really high up, although some sea spray got me and the rocks were wet so I got quite damp.
After that we went down to the beach and made me get all sandy then my owner and his brother saw a bunch of foam and immediately ran over to it and started kicking around the foam at each other. It was like a giant water-park, but instead of it being all water it was all foam, eventually they stopped kicking it and just walked to the truck in it.
When they got to the truck I was drenched in foam and water and the dad wouldn’t even let me go into the front or the back seats, I had to go into the back of the trunk with the dog all the way back home and the dog constantly slobbered all over me and sniffed me so much that I wanted to jump out the trunk. I was able to keep my sanity and stay in the trunk all the way home, but when I got taken home I got thrown straight into the wash. Once the washing machine started it felt really weird.
First the washing machine filled up with a bunch of water and once the washing machine was filled with water the machine started spinning slowly and as time went on it started spinning faster, then the dirty water got spun out and fresher water started pouring in. This continued to happen for a couple of minutes, then the washing machine started spinning really fast for a while and all of a sudden stopped, then I got taken out of the washing machine and put by a window while the sun was out to dry them.
The humans were worried that I wouldn’t be dry in time for school as school was starting on Monday, But I drank all the water on me just in time for school and everything was alright, I wasn’t being covered in foam, school was back and nobody got hurt, except for me, I was under a body the whole time that was happening and nobody cared.
I had a good/bad time, it was fun, but foam is really itchy!
By Kobe
